Dangerous

Okay, so everyone wanted me to post one of my stories that I've been working on, so here is the start of it.
Just so you know, it will be slow going, because I'm not that fast at it, lol. There will be a few of the batoto people in the first story, and more in some of the other ones I do.

NOTE TO MODERATORS: I do not mind off topic conversations in between my story posts.

Thank you to TheArux, SeeYou, Wanderous, and wEr4 for giving me the courage to post it. A special Thanks to Orcraniil for the perfect pic for Dangerous.

Another special thank you to Frost, my new editor. >^.^<

At the request of a couple of my readers, I will post my authors pic.


Dangerous Theme Song





Chapter 1: The Storm

The storm blew up out of nowhere in a violent swirl of wind and snow so intense it almost seemed unnatural. Snow fell in waves so thick visibility was at a record low. The ground was quickly covered with it, making travel virtually impossible, and it was sheer insanity to even attempt it. The entire region looked as if it had been turned into a shimmering white kingdom; tree limbs hanging low under the immense weight of the snow. Still the storm raged on.

As if in defiance of the storm, a small faded green pick-up truck pushed and putted its way slowly through the rapidly accumulating snow drifts, its worn engine sputtering continually. The windows were foggy and every so often a gloved hand wiped unsuccessfully at the moisture. Inside the cab it was somewhat warm, though the heater so old it could barely manage to keep going. The figure behind the wheel swiped worriedly at the windshield again, trying in vain to keep a semblance of visibility. The town had to be here somewhere.

Out of the blue the truck spun out of control, and the woman cranked hard on the wheel, trying desperately to force the truck back under control. No such luck. Annabelle's head slammed hard against the steering wheel as the truck careened into a large snow bank, sputtered, and died. She let out a groan, pressing her hand to her forehead in an effort to stop the the throbbing as she tried to start the truck. Stupid thing didn't even attempt to turn over, the clicking audible above the howling wind.

Cursing her bad fortune, she started bundling up; removing the heavy jacket so she could pile on more sweaters and her muffler. Satisfied that she had enough, she shoved her arms back through the sleeves of the over sized winter jacket, yanked up the zipper, and shoved open the door of the dead pick-up. Powerful wind gusts nearly yanked it off the hinges, throwing her off balance so that she fell, rather ungracefully, from the seat into the snow.

Muttering a string of curses she picked herself up, slammed the door, and took a cautious look around. With a sigh she began pushing her way through the snow, one gloved hand pressing the muffler to her face in an effort to protect it from the bitter cold. It was going to be a hellish walk, but in order to reach her goal, she didn't have a choice. Her life depended on making it to that town, wherever the hell it was.

"Holy shit, its freaking cold," she muttered acidly, the wind ripping her words away form her.

She walked for what seemed to be endless hours through the deadly storm, her body having gone numb so long ago she barely felt herself trembling violently. As she wiped yet another sheet of snow from her face she caught sight of faintly glowing lights not too far in the distance, and her heart pounded out a rhythm of hope. She forced her frozen, exhausted body forward.

By the time she drew near enough to see dim lights through the window of the nearest house, she felt ready to drop. It took her muddled brain a few moments to realize the house was no longer getting closer. She had, in fact, dropped to her knees, and as her vision blurred, she barely caught sight of a figure racing towards her as she fell face first in the snow. Damn it all, she had been so close, so close to survival....
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More to come soon.

Edited by Maia, 20 September 2012 - 08:51 PM.

moar.

she barely caught sight of a figure racing towards her as she fell face first in the snow. Damn it all, she had been so close, so close to survival....

You should name this strange figure "Kurt"

WAHHHHH!!! ~~<33 *snuggles and kisses Mama* is so descriptive and I actually am visual-ling it very well! Though the first story on begins with Belle-nee, it is an very good story~

I am also the first one to read it ~^0^~ I actually though you will begin it tomorroe but .... am I amazing~ Though I am not surprise since you are my mama. You will of course be amazing~ <33

Looking forward for more~



editted: second one after firefly-kun~ xD

Edited by Wanderous, 01 August 2012 - 01:15 AM.

Quite good, Im not one of those descrpitives authors, I focus more on comedy, but it is good.

I WANT MOAR!

Thank you, guys. >^.^<

Continuation of chapter one....



Takayuki paced restlessly through the safe house, a habit he had grown used to over the last year. He couldn't risk being outside for long, but he was starting to feel claustrophobic. The house wasn't all that big, but it was roomy enough; enough that it wouldn't be hard to mount a strong defense should the need arise. So far, he had been lucky, as had the rest of his team. It didn't help his case any that he wasn't used to staying in one place for that long of a time, and uneasiness was starting to settle in, bad.

Add a freak blizzard on top of it all, and he was having a down right shitty day. How much longer did he and the rest of the unit have to stay in hiding, and what the hell had happened to Belladonna? She had never made it to her safe house, and they couldn't help but wonder if she was even alive anymore. She had gotten them all out, but had she made it? Not knowing was driving him insane, and it didn't help that he didn't even know what the hell she looked like. She had made sure of that.

None of them knew who she really was. All they knew her as was Belladonna. When the unit had been ambushed by Vaygr and his horde of mercenaries, she had been the one to organize their escape. They were to wait a certain amount of time and she would contact them via a secured line. The call never came. And damn it, that really pissed him off. The only thing he could think of was that something had gone seriously wrong during the escape.

"I'm telling you, Wolf," he growled into his cellphone, "I'm starting to go crazy. I don't know how much more of this I can take."

"You aren't the only one, brother," the man on the other end replied. "Everyone is starting to get antsy. Been in one place for too long."

"Has anyone heard anything from Belladonna?" He asked as he crossed over to the window for the twentieth time today.

"No, but Wanderous found something interesting yesterday," Wolf said guardedly.

"What did she find?"

"A year ago, Belladonna's safe house was unlocked, accessed for two minutes tops, and resealed."

Taka froze, his hand on the curtain. How the hell could they all have missed that? "You're sure about this?" He carefully pulled the curtain away from the window a fraction.

"Yeah, man, and Arux confirmed it. I'm sending you the file."

Taka caught movement in his peripheral vision, and turned his attention to someone slowly moving through the snow. He watched for a moment, then moved away from the window. "Wolf, I'll call you back."

"You need backup?"

"Not yet. I'll let you know." He closed his cellphone, made sure he was armed and grabbed his coat. He made it out the door just in time to see the person fall to their knees, then face plant into the snow as he dove off the small porch. He slid to his knees beside them, and flipped the body over. "Are you fucking insane? What the hell are you doing out here?"

Even as he shouted at the person, he lifted them into his arms and rushed back to the house. They barely weighed a thing, and he judged the person to possibly be in their teens. He shook his head at the stupidity of the situation, and slammed the door shut with his foot. Damn it all, this is just what he needed. More damned complications. He set the stranger on the couch, and moved over to the wall to jack the heat up. Grabbing some clothes and several blankets he moved back to the couch. Quickly he started yanking off the soaked clothing, and muffler, and almost swore when he realized it was a girl.

"My god woman, you really must be insane," he said as he pulled off the rest of the soaked clothing and replaced it with over sized sweat pants and shirt, and covered her with the blankets. She was shaking horribly, and her lips were tinted blue. Not good. Oh yeah, now it was going to be a really long night. Son of a bitch. Just his freaking luck.






Chapter two coming soon.

Edited by Maia, 13 September 2012 - 12:31 AM.

This is good, Maia! Keep it up! I can't wait for more.

Thank you.
I'm currently working on chapter two.

Edited by Maia, 07 August 2012 - 08:21 PM.

Maiaaaa~ ur good at writing :3 cant wait for the next one~

>^.^<
currently in progress.

"Holy shit, its freaking cold,"

That is totally something Anna would say.

When the unit had been ambushed by Vaygr and his horde of mercenaries,

I laughed pretty hard at that one.

I like the story so far! Can't wait to read more!

i nice good slice of melon bread mom :3

Wow...just...wow.

My Okaa-sama's such an awesome writer

(Now I wonder what my role would be...Do I get to break anyone's backs? FUfufufufuufufu)

Glad you all are liking it so far.

Maia-nee!! I am so happy to read your story XD
hehe I laughed too when I read about Vaygr-kun^^

I feel so lucky to be able to read everyone's stories!
and I should be the one to thank you Maia-chan, for letting us read it<3*

I don't really get the references to the real-life characters (need to get to know everyone! =><"=)

However, I can safely say that you're brilliant at writing~ <3
Can't wait for more! ~ <3

=（＾Ｏ＾)=☆♪ Author Maia-chan~ <3♪ ♪ Maia-chan~ <3 ♪...♪
“ヽ=(´▽｀)=ノ” Genius Maia-chhaaaaaaaaaannnnnnn~ ♪

(ﾉ´▽｀)ﾉ♪ Clever Maia-chaaaaannnn~ ♪

Edited by ☆Snazzy☆Zombie☆Mudkip☆, 01 August 2012 - 03:14 PM.

Hee hee, thank you, Muddy and You-chan.

And now.....

Chapter 2: Convergence

Swearing profusely, Wolf snapped his cell phone shut and made his way to the bedroom where he kept most of his weapons. The duffel was stuffed under his bed, and he yanked it out with a bit more force than he planned. Something was wrong, he just couldn't put his finger on it, but he knew it had something to do with Taka and the way he just suddenly ended the call like that. Taka usually wouldn't do that, or say that he wasn't sure if he needed backup, which, Wolf was convinced he would. Damn it, just damn it.

While he stuffed the rest of his guns and knives into the bag with one hand, he used his other to punch in another number. Damn it, if something happened to the little shit, he was going to personally kick his ass. But for now, he was going to need to get everyone else here, and it had to be fast. If Taka called, he wanted to make sure that they could move in not too long after. As he waited for The Rock to pick up he grabbed the duffel and wandered back into the living room, tossing the heavy bag onto the slightly worn couch.

"Now, why would the Wolf-man be calling the Great One?" Rock asked as soon as the line connected. Wolf could hear loud music blaring in the background. That was nothing new.

"We might have a situation at Taka's," he stated flatly. The music was cut off abruptly, "I want you and the others here, yesterday."

"I'm on it. Bazooka is already making calls," Rock said quickly, all business now.

"Rock," Wolf said. "Bring The Tumblers."

"Man, like you even gotta ask," he said and cut the connection.

He didn't know what the hell was going on, but he was going to make damn sure they were ready. Too much shit had gone wrong for them already, and he knew damned well they didn't want anymore. He sighed and started packing the rest of his gear. He was in the process of stuffing his laptop in its case when his phone started ringing. He looked at the view screen, and shook his head, smiling. It was just like Wanderous, always on top of the ball. Pain in the ass. He answered the call.

"Damn, Gadget, can't a man have some privacy?" He asked, laughing.

"Aw, but its so much fun to watch you guys being all pervy," came her cheery reply.

"Ha! You only wish we were," he said, stuffing the laptop in its bag.

"Then never spend the night at Rock and Lal's. I could make a fortune off that crap," she countered.

"Gadget, I do NOT want to know."

"Anyway, why the sudden packing of all your precious toys?" She asked seriously.

"Possible situation at Taka's. You got any of your little spy cams at his place?" Knowing her, yeah, she did.

"Nah, he found them all, so did Angel and Maia. We'll be at your place in twenty, Wolf-nii." The line went dead.

"Yeah, I'll see you then," he said as he closed his cell phone.

He moved over to the window and pulled the blinds back, watching the snow as it continued to pile up on the ground. Had it really been one year ago that he and the rest of his team had been locked away in cages like lab rats? He was covered in a mass amount of scars from endless days of nightmarish torture. They all were. He pressed his fingers to his eyes, fighting back a sudden rising headache. What the hell was going on? And who did they have to kill now?

His hands balled into tight fists as their hated enemies face came to mind. Someday, they were gonna catch that bastard, and he was going to enjoy every moment of his slow, painful death. He caught sight of an ATV as it plowed its way through the snow to his safe house and he shook his head. Twenty minutes my ass, he thought as he grinned. He crossed over to the door and shut down the alarm system as the ATV cut its powerful engine. Wanderous and Orcra jumped down and headed for the door.
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Second half coming soon.

Edited by Maia, 27 August 2012 - 10:41 PM.

"Now, why would the Wolf-man be calling the Great One?" Rock asked as soon as he the line connected. Wolf could hear loud music blaring in the background. That was nothing new.

Nice use of "The Great One's" quote

Lol xD It is just so like everyone. Mama shows an excellent ....what is the word.. insight on everyone's personality~ ^-^~

Ohh myyy~ It is only the beginnin and the excitement is already there.
Who can heal from the past wounds?~ pops in my head.

Yes, Very amazing talent ~ shows how well you know everyone, mama~ <3

I await your next chapter(s)~

Well, its not going to be the next chapter yet, still working on the second half of chapter two