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The Rhyming Story

Started by Katzilla, Apr 08 2012 08:58 PM
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You've probably read a children book as a kid, or had someone read one to you. Most children books use rhyming as a way to make the story entertaining.

So how about we create our own rhyming story?

-It doesn't have to be restricted to a PG rating, go wild (but stay within Batoto TOS).
-The default is 4 lines a verse. If you want to write more, make the lines number a multiple of 4.
-You don't need to continue the above poster's rhyming, only the story. Though it is recommended.
-The general rhyming scheme is AABB and ABAB, but a little deviance is allowed.
http://wiki.answers.com/Q/What_is_an_aabb_rhyme_scheme
-Never read a rhyming story before? Here's a humorous (albeit not exactly for children) example:
http://www.smbc-comics.com/images/Bobby%20and%20the%20Gurg.pdf
-Need help rhyming? Here's a site that might help:
http://www.rhymezone.com/

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With that said, let's start:

A long, long time ago,
A story of ancient history.
In a land filled with snow,
A land filled with mystery.

Edited by Katilicious, 09 April 2012 - 10:15 PM.

Posted 08 April 2012 - 08:58 PM

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Now without any delay,
Be it as it may
The characters we shall introduce
Let us start with Bruce.

Posted 09 April 2012 - 03:35 AM

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Bruce was your average kind of guy;
But the type everyone would stop and say hi;
Is Bruce as good a person as told?
Many secrets this gentleman may hold.

Edited by Jabberwocky, 09 April 2012 - 05:41 AM.

Posted 09 April 2012 - 05:24 AM

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His build was average to you and me
He wasn't short, nor tall as a tree
And neither a thick or a lanky stance
He was hardly a man you'd note at a glance.

Posted 09 April 2012 - 09:24 PM

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Despite that he wasn't a looker,
His secret was that of being a hooker.
Woe, Bruce, what has fate have in store?
Let's begin his story once more.

Posted 09 April 2012 - 09:40 PM

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In the far reaches of the Mediterranean sea,
Where our hero was just a sailor trainee.
Clouds gathered and began to transform,
To what looks to be a mighty storm.

Posted 09 April 2012 - 10:22 PM

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as a storm surely formed,
a hero was also born,
with the storm sure to dig a sailor's grave,
none can dig a brave soul's

Posted 09 April 2012 - 10:58 PM

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"Avast ye!", he cried with a chilly sweat
"This may be our worst tide yet!"
Sailors abandoning ship, sailors fastening rums
You truly know the good seamen when the storm comes.

"If clouds are gathering thick and fast,
Keep sharp look out for sail and mast,
But if they slowly onward crawl,
Shoot your lines, nets and trawl."

Edited by Katilicious, 09 April 2012 - 11:19 PM.

Posted 09 April 2012 - 11:18 PM

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the storm thundered
while our hero pondered;
about what, we can only guess.
meanwhile, trouble stirred below decks.

Posted 11 April 2012 - 01:49 AM

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Indeed, right under their noses, trouble brew
For there was a traitor among the crew
Below the decks, a man of greed
Began his plan of terrible misdeed

Posted 11 April 2012 - 02:09 AM

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with his evil-moustached-look
and sinister monocle
the captain's like he took,
with his movements precise and practical

Edited by weibimof, 11 April 2012 - 03:27 AM.

Posted 11 April 2012 - 02:31 AM

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And when at last, the crew had seen
What a man of treachery he had truly been
They cast him overboard,
And said, find your own way, you traitorous lord

Posted 11 April 2012 - 05:43 AM

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The traitor was gone, but not dead
He clung to some debris and said,
"I'll be back for my revenge, you hear!"
"I am a man you all should fear!"

Edited by Xbox User, 15 April 2012 - 01:40 AM.

Posted 15 April 2012 - 01:40 AM

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With a single yell, his trace was gone
As the sun rose up to the break of dawn
No longer could they hear death's knell
For the storm was gone, and all was well

Our hero rejoiced with a cheerful glee
As he saw something at the end of the sea.
Bruce couldn't believe it, he rubbed his eyes
He finally found it, he found his prize.

A colossal land, bigger than anything he's seen
A land he sought after, ever since he was a teen
"Captain! We've found it!" he shouted with joy,
"Yes," the captain replied, "Yes we have, boy".

Posted 15 April 2012 - 04:51 AM

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The Moving Island this place has been named
For this colossal island's location was never the same
Was it magic that made this colossal island set sail
Or maybe it was on the back of a colossal whale

The answer to this question no one knew
Why did it move? No one had a clue
But this island has been rumored to be a paradise
However, getting off this island comes at a price

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Indeed, young travelers, forewarn of these claims
For 'Moving Island' is only one of its names.
The island of misery, the island of death,
The island where one draws his last breath.

Many a sailor have gone for the dive,
But alas, none have come back alive
Blinded by greed, they charged for the dough
However, in the end, they reaped what they sow.

Edited by Katzilla, 15 April 2012 - 06:25 PM.

Posted 15 April 2012 - 06:13 PM

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Now what is it that our young hero and crew seeks?
What made them journey to this island, which took many weeks?
Mountains of gold, a cursed treasure, or maybe a lost love?
Unfathomable wealth, power, or all of the above?

Just what is it that made our hero and crew so brave
To travel to the island where men have dug their own grave
To the island thats location is never the same
Is it here that they wish to find fortune and fame?

Posted 15 April 2012 - 07:25 PM

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Yet perhaps there's another secret in store
Hidden in our hero's memory galore
That Island was once his long lost home
A separated part of Rome

Posted 17 April 2012 - 02:39 AM

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"Captain!" Bruce yelled, "We must go there!
This agonizing heart can no longer bear!"
"Yes," replied the captain, "We shall embark,
We need to get a move on before it gets dark,"

Posted 17 April 2012 - 03:41 AM

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so they rowed ashore
with earnest haste.
they had the whole island to explore,
and no time to waste.

Edited by weibimof, 17 April 2012 - 03:52 AM.

Posted 17 April 2012 - 03:51 AM

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