The only condition is that it must be made up on the spot. Have fun!
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Be creative! Let your mind run wild!
Impromptu poetry!
Started by LittleMelon18, Jan 12 2012 09:53 PM
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Inspired by Jab and I's exchange of poetry in the "Cam whores are us" thread. xD Here, you can submit random poetry to share for all of us to read.
The only condition is that it must be made up on the spot. Have fun!
Enjoyed it? xD Your turn!
Be creative! Let your mind run wild!
The only condition is that it must be made up on the spot. Have fun!
Enjoyed it? xD Your turn!
Be creative! Let your mind run wild!
Posted 12 January 2012 - 09:53 PM
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alright im romantic guy so her goes. "if the sun is brimming bright then so is she with her beautiful smile...... if the moon is full and colorful then so is she with her sparkling beautiful eye's...... if the ocean is pure blue then so is her soul which is pure as light......wen roses bloom she get's ever more beautiful and spreads her joy to the world! poem isn't just for any girl!
Edited by starboy, 17 August 2012 - 11:17 PM.
Posted 13 January 2012 - 12:38 AM
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The path of the righteous man is beset on all sides by the iniquities of the selfish and the tyranny of evil men. Blessed is he, who in the name of charity and good will, shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is truly his brother's keeper and the finder of lost children. And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who would attempt to poison and destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon thee.
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Sure about that? You could use that for any skirt you chase. >.>
Posted 13 January 2012 - 01:03 AM
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lost in the darkness of my own self..... i see no light everything is pitch black but beyond the endless darkness theirs doors which lead to nothing but this door is different... i open it and begin to walk through steps following the echos which guide me to another door wen i open this door i see a sad little boy who's crying and lonely all the time in his room....his dad's an alcoholic who comes home drunk all the time....his mom works to much so she has no time for the boy... and wen they meet all they do is fight and argue.... tired of the sadness the boy opens the window of his room holding his teddy bear... jumps! later wakes up from the endless darkness i see a fairy and smile.... thanks for saving me... i had the nightmare again...
Edited by Angel., 13 January 2012 - 01:11 AM.
Posted 13 January 2012 - 01:10 AM
The path of the righteous man is beset on all sides by the iniquities of the selfish and the tyranny of evil men. Blessed is he, who in the name of charity and good will, shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is truly his brother's keeper and the finder of lost children. And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who would attempt to poison and destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon thee.
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nah...Sure about that? You could use that for any skirt you chase. >.>
Posted 13 January 2012 - 01:12 AM
The path of the righteous man is beset on all sides by the iniquities of the selfish and the tyranny of evil men. Blessed is he, who in the name of charity and good will, shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is truly his brother's keeper and the finder of lost children. And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who would attempt to poison and destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon thee.
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nah...
Do you have a special someone,
May I ask?
A girl who has captured your heart,
It must be some task.
For you are captivated by the allure of skirts,
Behind a plain poker mask.
Posted 13 January 2012 - 01:17 AM
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it's you cause your sweet Mellon seeds have begone to grow on my heart!
Posted 13 January 2012 - 01:21 AM
The path of the righteous man is beset on all sides by the iniquities of the selfish and the tyranny of evil men. Blessed is he, who in the name of charity and good will, shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is truly his brother's keeper and the finder of lost children. And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who would attempt to poison and destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon thee.
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Don't flatter me,
My dear Angel,
For lying is a sin.
I don't agree,
My dear Angel,
Much to my chagrin.
My dear Angel,
For lying is a sin.
I don't agree,
My dear Angel,
Much to my chagrin.
Posted 13 January 2012 - 01:25 AM
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Angels don't lie do they? i cant get you out of my mind its driven me crazy.... i can't help feeling this way!
Posted 13 January 2012 - 01:36 AM
The path of the righteous man is beset on all sides by the iniquities of the selfish and the tyranny of evil men. Blessed is he, who in the name of charity and good will, shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is truly his brother's keeper and the finder of lost children. And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who would attempt to poison and destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon thee.
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Surely you meant what you say?
For you can't keep your thoughts at bay.
I tell you to stop, if I may.
For you, your feelings beyond will sway.
For you can't keep your thoughts at bay.
I tell you to stop, if I may.
For you, your feelings beyond will sway.
Posted 13 January 2012 - 01:40 AM
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you reject me now but maybe deep down you want me to chase after you. shy love.... fine ill go talk to other girls since im single... anyways more poetry people!
Edited by Angel., 23 January 2013 - 12:16 AM.
Posted 13 January 2012 - 01:52 AM
The path of the righteous man is beset on all sides by the iniquities of the selfish and the tyranny of evil men. Blessed is he, who in the name of charity and good will, shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is truly his brother's keeper and the finder of lost children. And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who would attempt to poison and destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon thee.
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fine i won't give up on you! ill get your love someday! just remember im there for you. wen your sad ill be your tissue.
Edited by Angel., 23 January 2013 - 12:16 AM.
Posted 13 January 2012 - 02:04 AM
The path of the righteous man is beset on all sides by the iniquities of the selfish and the tyranny of evil men. Blessed is he, who in the name of charity and good will, shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is truly his brother's keeper and the finder of lost children. And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who would attempt to poison and destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon thee.
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Dream on!
That's a task much too big
To steal my love yon'.
Move on!
That's a task you can do
With your non-existent brawn.
That's a task much too big
To steal my love yon'.
Move on!
That's a task you can do
With your non-existent brawn.
Posted 13 January 2012 - 02:06 AM
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well nobody said it would be easy! even wen im with other girls ill think of your beautiful sweet smile which pierces right through everybody's heart but i won't let them have you cause your a Mellon to sweet to give up on.
Edited by Angel., 23 January 2013 - 12:16 AM.
Posted 13 January 2012 - 02:10 AM
The path of the righteous man is beset on all sides by the iniquities of the selfish and the tyranny of evil men. Blessed is he, who in the name of charity and good will, shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is truly his brother's keeper and the finder of lost children. And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who would attempt to poison and destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon thee.
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where's your poem girl!.
Posted 13 January 2012 - 02:25 AM
The path of the righteous man is beset on all sides by the iniquities of the selfish and the tyranny of evil men. Blessed is he, who in the name of charity and good will, shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is truly his brother's keeper and the finder of lost children. And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who would attempt to poison and destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon thee.
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i don't know make a poem.... inspire me with your love...What poem?
Posted 13 January 2012 - 02:29 AM
The path of the righteous man is beset on all sides by the iniquities of the selfish and the tyranny of evil men. Blessed is he, who in the name of charity and good will, shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is truly his brother's keeper and the finder of lost children. And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who would attempt to poison and destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon thee.
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What are you talking about?
There is no love for you here
In my heart, no doubt.
I told you,
That it's futile
Dans ce lieu.
There is no love for you here
In my heart, no doubt.
I told you,
That it's futile
Dans ce lieu.
Posted 13 January 2012 - 02:33 AM
