Story flow: 4.5/5
Overall a pretty decent manga, I generally enjoyed every chapter so far and kept me interested (rather than leaving with the feeling at the end of the chapter, "that's it?") It has a pretty good potential and the plot isn't going too fast or slow. Now a little bit of criticism: The display of the characters isn't very strong and the story doesn't put enough effort reveal each person's personality. (Like for instance in such cases: how would you judge who to vote for as a favorite character on a poll? If you had a wiki site for the manga, what would you write for the part of the main characters' pages?) The one thing that throws me off is this whole wish to be a hero thing, it's a bit cheesy even for a shonen manga that's targeted towards a younger audience. It would help with empathizing with the protagonist more if he had a more impressive or emotional ideal.
But it's only been 11 chapters I would say overall pretty good and recommendable. =]
Edited by Saphsin, 19 November 2011 - 02:27 AM.